FEEDBACK

These are the feedback sheets for our title sequences we showed to our class. It includes feedback for both title sequences. Most of the feedback say that we need a new font as it is difficult to read so we will change this and I will look for another font for the credits. Overall our class preferred the second version which was our original one. On Julia's version the colour needs to be sorted out as it has a blue tinge to it and the footage looks stretched so were going to scrap that version and just continue editing from our original version.

FEEDBACK ON PITCH

These are the feedback sheets from our class after we presented our pitch. Most people said they enjoyed our narrative, character details and release date however what we need to work on would be getting a title for our film and looking more carefully into our budget as a few of our stars are well known which would increase the budget, along with our choice to have our film set in three different locations.